From a Distance

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By Sa`ge

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Love Unseen


our hearts begin to flutter,

with the lightness of a dove's feather,


our souls soar past the clouds.

as growth happens after the ground is plowed,


so doth this love stay true,

this love held by me and you.


as the first snow falls upon the ground,

we shall whisper these sounds,


my darling to thine heart I shall be,

no truer words shall be shared then these,


that mine heart belongs to thee.

T'is our warmth that melts the freeze.


as one breathes easy after a sneeze,

and the air freshens after a summer's breeze,


our love shall soar into the heavens.

waltzing to the music of Beethoven,


we shall melt in each others arms,

then be empowered by both our charms.


shall we but naught be from then to now,

to be separated by such a span,


as that shore line between sea and sand?

yet our love doth travel thus,


two hearts entwined as such.

shall one day our finger tips touch?

© 2010 SA`GE CABALIS

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 19 months ago

What a wonderful love poem Sa'age. Beautiful and voted up.

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Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago

Ooh! that's warm and cuddly! Now I feel all mushy inside!

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

thank you acaetnna :D i am so happy you liked it LD thanks for the bote too, i so appreciate it. :D aloha :D

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

Oh Michael Dear, I love it when you get all mushy inside :D

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Fiddleman Level 5 Commenter 19 months ago

Up and beautiful. Love the expression and feeling.

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

Fiddleman; I thank you and appreciate your comment and vote; Thank you so much for stopping by. Please come again :D I am going to see you now! :D

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Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago

This is so very pretty!

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

Thank you M I am glad you enjoy it so. :D I get good inspiration lately :D love ya! :D

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dahoglund Level 7 Commenter 19 months ago

voted up and beautiful. Nice expression of love.

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Georgie98 19 months ago

Voted up, awesome and beautiful! I love it, very inspirational! Off to read others now. :)

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BobbiRant Level 5 Commenter 19 months ago

Such a pretty poem. It just glides along, graceful in both word and imagination. It makes me feel good to read this. Thank you so much.

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

dahoglund:

thank you and I hope to see you again soon. :D hugs :D

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

Georgie98:

Hey hey, You came for more visits, thank you so much, I appreciate it. glad you like this one. :D hugs :D

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

Bobbi:

Thank you for your wonderful comment, I appreciate your visits, and hope you will come back soon. will be dropping in on you very soon. :D hugs :D

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Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago

I have half-himers and maybe magnesia too. I had to come back for a refresher.

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 19 months ago

A very beautiful poem. Awesome!!

Cheers

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

well, I am glad to see you coming back for refresher, that way I know you really like this piece. love you :D hugs :D

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

always:

thank you so much I love your comments. :D hugs :D

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Freya Cesare Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago

I am melted, Sa'ge. Hey King Micky, lend me your bicycle so I can speed up myself to Sa'ge. Didn't you heard she is calling me? :P

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Sa`ge Hub Author 19 months ago

Freya my Dear Sister;

you are a wonderful soul:D and I do love you, you are such a dear friend and sister on truth. :D thank you for being you, you are beautiful. :D hugs :D

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SteveoMc 17 months ago

Thanks for the props. I liked the poetry and poetry is a hard sell for me.

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Sa`ge Hub Author 17 months ago

SteveoMc;

In that case I am very happy that you made it to my site to read this piece. I am happy you liked it and hope you get to read some others and that you will enjoy more of my work. Have a wonderful week. :D hugs :D

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